Photography: good images, good lighting, works with genre good variety of images and models Layout: good use of teasers, columns, maybe add a different colour it looks a bit too pink but it works with the genre maybe change font or colour for the main cover line as ot it a bit difficult to read contents page: good layout and good amount of text
Well Done Zenab ! Your Contents Page, DPS and Front cover are excellent. I especially love the use of the of your colour scheme. The use of the colour pink gives me a obvious indication of the gender that the featured artist is about; the colours pink and white makes the pages more vibrant,you chose a good range of colours. Analysis: - photography: there is good lighting in the photograph,you have captured the model in a good angle and a good range of models used. - Layout: The layouts for every document is good. The only dissapointment is that in the DPS there needs to be a space in the 2nd paragraph. - The colour scheme : the colour scheme pink and white is good but it needs one more colour. Normally colour schemes consist three colours. - The 'S' on the double page spread needs to be a little bit smaller for that particular paragraph. - The layout on the contents page is very spacious and you are able to read everything on the page however, what may need to be changed will probably be the lines that divides the text. There's too many on the contents page.
I really like all yur images, your used arange of shots which is good, from your front cover, i like the image you used which was side pose however ypur coloyr scheme is abit too pink and white, maybe you can add another colour because it looks abit too girly but if thats the look your going for then thats ok.
I like the photography, there is a wide range of poses and angle shots I like the consistant colour scheme, its eye catching and im guessing your magazine is aimed for females Decent amount of text but looks boring because they are masive chunks I like how your pull quote in the dps connotates your model as a dancer as she is doing an iconic mj pose and he was know for his dance moves
Photography: good images, good lighting, works with genre
ReplyDeletegood variety of images and models
Layout: good use of teasers, columns,
maybe add a different colour it looks a bit too pink but it works with the genre
maybe change font or colour for the main cover line as ot it a bit difficult to read
contents page:
good layout and good amount of text
Well Done Zenab ! Your Contents Page, DPS and Front cover are excellent. I especially love the use of the of your colour scheme. The use of the colour pink gives me a obvious indication of the gender that the featured artist is about; the colours pink and white makes the pages more vibrant,you chose a good range of colours.
ReplyDeleteAnalysis:
- photography: there is good lighting in the photograph,you have captured the model in a good angle and a good range of models used.
- Layout: The layouts for every document is good. The only dissapointment is that in the DPS there needs to be a space in the 2nd paragraph.
- The colour scheme : the colour scheme pink and white is good but it needs one more colour. Normally colour schemes consist three colours.
- The 'S' on the double page spread needs to be a little bit smaller for that particular paragraph.
- The layout on the contents page is very spacious and you are able to read everything on the page however, what may need to be changed will probably be the lines that divides the text. There's too many on the contents page.
I really like all yur images, your used arange of shots which is good, from your front cover, i like the image you used which was side pose however ypur coloyr scheme is abit too pink and white, maybe you can add another colour because it looks abit too girly but if thats the look your going for then thats ok.
ReplyDeleteI like the photography, there is a wide range of poses and angle shots
ReplyDeleteI like the consistant colour scheme, its eye catching and im guessing your magazine is aimed for females
Decent amount of text but looks boring because they are masive chunks
I like how your pull quote in the dps connotates your model as a dancer as she is doing an iconic mj pose and he was know for his dance moves