An improvement could be that you shouldn't cut the head off of the model as this makes the image look weird. Proofread to make sure it all makes sense for instance you mention that somethings weekly but then go on to say something about it dayly. Move the barcode further down on the cover page Make the writing bigger on the DPS
An improvement could be that you shouldn't cut the head off of the model as this makes the image look weird.
ReplyDeleteProofread to make sure it all makes sense for instance you mention that somethings weekly but then go on to say something about it dayly.
Move the barcode further down on the cover page
Make the writing bigger on the DPS
make sure you add a price in the future and also you may need to add more pages in the magazine
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