FEEDBACK ON FINISHED MAGAZINE

Looking back at feedback you received from the college magazine, how do you feel your technical and creative skills have developed?

FEEDBACK ON FINISHED MAGAZINE

   What could be improved?

FEEDBACK ON FINISHED MAGAZINE

    Which elements of the magazine does the audience like?

FEEDBACK ON FINISHED MAGAZINE

I've used only female models, does this matter? how are women portrayed? What messages and values come across to clubbing magazine? Positive and Negative? Mixed?

FEEDBACK ON FINISHED MAGAZINE

Who are the audience? Are they the group that you initially targeted?

FINAL FRONT COVER, CONTENT AND DPS (FIXED AUDIENCE FEEDBACK)

Audience feedback consideration on colour scheme

The first four i took in consideration of choosing a differnt colour scheme nd alo adding another colour to my colour scheme to see how it would look. i didnt muh like it to be honest, i think it just kind of works ith the to colour. so i just thought i should try another colour, so i took the colour from my models t-shirt to see how it looks and i liked it, so i changed it to that colour so it comes out a formal clubbing and raving magazine cover, focusing on the actual styles of music.

First Draft ;Magazine Front Cover, Content Page and DPS